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3		-{{id name="#UM"/}}Following this helps:
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6		-* **people in a hurry** – simply written content is quicker to scan
7		-* **people who are stressed** – if you're anxious it's harder to comprehend things
8		-* **people who are multi-tasking** – when distracted you cannot concentrate on complex text
9		-* **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words carry less cognitive load
10		-* **visual impairments** – short, simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller visual field
11		-* **motor impairments** – it's less tiring when you can understand what you read quickly
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15		-== Guidance ==
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18		-The [[legal>>doc:||anchor="l"]], [[medical>>doc:||anchor="m"]] and [[financial>>doc:||anchor="mo"]] professions are known for using complex terminology. But it's not necessary and confuses people who use their services.
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	2	+The legal, medical and financial professions are known for using complex terminology. But it's not necessary and confuses people who use their services.
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21		-=== Law ===
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23		-Judges need to decide what legal writers intended by their writing. They evolved a set of tools for this analysis: Statutory Interpretation. Using plain English can make meaning clear, so that judges avoid relying on sometimes contradictory interpretations.
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32		-[[Usability evidence: plain English in law>>doc:||anchor="#UEL"]]
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35		-=== Medicine ===
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37		-People need doctors' letters and consultant reports to be easy to understand. And they need online information about health conditions to be comprehensible.
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49		-=== Money ===
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51		-Many people do not understand financial terms. This causes problems. Complex terminology describing conceptual arrangements about a non-tangible resource does not help anyone.
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68	68	== {{id name="l"/}}Law ==
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70		-=== {{id name="#l1"/}}1. Use simple language for legal terms. ===
	14	+Judges need to decide what legal writers intended their writing to mean. They have evolved a set of tools for this analysis: Statutory Interpretation.
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72		-If information on your website is unclear your organisation could be taken to court and lose, even if content is approved by your legal department.
	16	+Writing in plain English can make meaning clear, so that judges don’t have to rely on sometimes contradictory interpretations.
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	18	+If information on your website is unclear your organisation could be taken to court and lose, even if the content was approved by a legal department.
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75		-=== {{id name="#l2"/}}2. Explain the law in context. ===
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77		-When you refer to a law, or part of it, explain what that law is at the point of user need. Do not only refer to it in a reference section or appendix.
	21	+=== 1. Explain the law simply, in context. ===
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	23	+When you refer to a law, or part of it, explain what the law is about right there at the point of user need. Do not only refer to it in a reference section or appendix.
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80		-Example:
81		-\\(% class="mark" %)Positioned at the top of a form, not hidden away in references section.
	25	+>Example:
	26	+> "We collect personal information on this form under section 26 the Freedom of Information and Protection of Privacy Act, because it concerns our programs and activities (c), and it is necessary for planning and evaluating our programs and activities(e)."
	27	+> This content is positioned at the top of a form, not hidden away in references section.
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84		-"We collect personal information on this form under section 26 the Freedom of Information and Protection of Privacy Act, because it concerns our programs and activities (c), and it is necessary for planning and evaluating our programs and activities(e)."
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	29	+>Example:
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	31	+>"Direct sales contract — exemptions from application of the Act" [Subheading]"
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	33	+>5 (1) This section describes direct sellers that are, and circumstances in which direct sellers are, exempt from the application of sections 19 to 22 (required contents, direct sales contracts, direct sales contract — cancellation, credit agreement respecting direct sales contract) of the Act." [Body copy]
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94		-(% class="mark" %)5 (1) This section describes direct sellers that are, and circumstances in which direct sellers are, exempt from the application of sections 19 to 22 (required contents, direct sales contracts, direct sales contract — cancellation, credit agreement respecting direct sales contract) of the Act."
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96	96	== ==
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98		-=== {{id name="#UEL"/}}Usability evidence: plain English in law ===
	37	+== Usability evidence for plain English in law ==
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100	100	[['Joseph Kimble—No, the law does not (normally) require legalese'>>url:http://www.ivacheung.com/2015/07/joseph-kimble-no-the-law-does-not-normally-require-legalese-editing-goes-global-2015/]] Editing Goes Global, 2015. Professor Joseph Kimble discusses the "psuedo-precision of legalese".
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108	108	[[Plain English Campaign>>url:http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/campaigning/past-campaigns/legal/drafting-in-plain-english.html]] believes legalese is unnecessary and does not do what it was intended to. "The argument that clarity should be sacrificed for a document to be comprehensive does not stand up."
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113		-== {{id name="m"/}}Medicine
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	51	+== {{id name="m"/}}Medicine ==
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116		-=== {{id name="#m1"/}}1. Write clearly. ===
	53	+People need letters and reports about their health from doctors and consultants to be easy to understand. And they need online information to be comprehensible.
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	56	+=== 1. Write clearly. ===
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118	118	Users of the information might be in shock or anxious, which reduces cognition.
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121		-=== {{id name="#m2"/}} 2. Explain medical terms. ===
	61	+=== 2. Explain medical terms. ===
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123	123	Medical terms are likely not to be understood by your readers. It is likely assuming they would know a word in a foreign language. Follow the word or phrase with a plain English explanation.
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126		-=== {{id name="#UM"/}}Usability evidence: plain English in medicine ===
	66	+== Usability evidence for plain English in medicine ==
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128		-[[Guide to medical information>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/medicalguide.pdf]] from Plain English Campaign.
	68	+[[Plain English Campaign – guide to medical information>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/medicalguide.pdf]]
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130		-[[Guidance on writing letters to outpatients>>http://www.aomrc.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2018/09/Please_write_to_me_Guidance_010918.pdf]] from Academy of Medical Royal Colleges.
	70	+[[Academy of Medical Royal Colleges – Guidance on writing letters to outpatients>>http://www.aomrc.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2018/09/Please_write_to_me_Guidance_010918.pdf]]
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132		-[['Clarity is king – the evidence that reveals the desperate need to re-think the way we write'>>https://gds.blog.gov.uk/2014/02/17/guest-post-clarity-is-king-the-evidence-that-reveals-the-desperate-need-to-re-think-the-way-we-write/]] GDS blog, Mark Morris, 2014
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134		-[['Connecting with audiences: An evidence-based language sourcebook for the Department of Health'>>http://www.linguisticlandscapes.co.uk/pdf/DH%20Language%20Guidelines%20230710%20FINAL_for%20website_240114.pdf]] Linguistic Landscapes, July 2010
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136		-[[NHS content style guide beta>>https://beta.nhs.uk/service-manual/content/how-we-write]], January 2019
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143	143	== {{id name="mo"/}}Money ==
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145		-=== {{id name="#mo1"/}}1. Use clear language. ===
	75	+Many people do not understand their finances and it causes them problems. Complex terminology describing concept-heavy arrangements about a non-tangible resource makes things difficult for everybody.
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147		-Dealing with financial issues can be stressful, which means your audience will have less cognitive capability available. Make your information easy for them to understand.
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150		-=== {{id name="#mo2"/}}2. Explain terminology. ===
	78	+=== 1. Use clear language. ===
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152		-Avoid using financial jargon. Acronyms and pseudonyms may make sense internally, but people using your services may not understand them.
	80	+=== ===
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	82	+=== 2. Explain terminology. ===
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155		-=== {{id name="#mo3"/}}3. Give examples of conceptual arrangements. ===
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157		-A tracker or shared ownership mortgage is easier to understand if you give examples.
	86	+=== 3. Give examples of conceptual arrangements. ===
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159		-This is important for credit arrangements where there is an initial interest rate that may change.
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	89	+== Usability evidence for plain English in finance ==
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162		-=== {{id name="#UEMO"/}}Usability evidence: plain English in finance ===
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164		-[[A to Z of financial terms (PDF 87KB)>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/financialguide.pdf]] from Plain English Campaign.
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166		-[[Plain English guide to financial term (PDF 686KB)>>https://www.nala.ie/resources/plain-english-guide-financial-terms]] from National Adult Literacy Agency, Ireland, January 2009.
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