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34 34  
35 35  === Medicine ===
36 36  
37 -People need doctors' letters and consultant reports to be easy to understand. And they need online information about health conditions to be comprehensible.  
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39 -
40 40  (% class="wikigeneratedid" id="H1.Writeclearly." %)
41 41  [[1. Write clearly.>>doc:||anchor="#m1"]]
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48 48  
49 49  === Money ===
50 50  
51 -Many people do not understand financial terms. This causes problems. Complex terminology describing conceptual arrangements about a non-tangible resource does not help anyone. 
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54 54  (% class="wikigeneratedid" id="H1.Useclearlanguage." %)
55 55  [[1. Use clear language.>>doc:||anchor="#mo1"]]
56 56  
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65 65  
66 66  ----
67 67  
68 -== {{id name="l"/}}Law – plain English guidelines ==
62 +== {{id name="l"/}}Law ==
69 69  
70 70  === {{id name="#l1"/}}1. Use simple language for legal terms. ===
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110 110  
111 111  ----
112 112  
113 -== {{id name="m"/}}Medicine – plain English guidelines ==
107 +== {{id name="m"/}}Medicine ==
114 114  
109 +People need letters and reports about their health from doctors and consultants to be easy to understand. And they need online information to be comprehensible. 
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111 +
115 115  === {{id name="#m1"/}}1. Write clearly. ===
116 116  
117 117  Users of the information might be in shock or anxious, which reduces cognition.
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139 139  
140 140  == ==
141 141  
142 -== {{id name="mo"/}}Money – plain English guidelines ==
139 +== {{id name="mo"/}}Money ==
143 143  
141 +Many people do not understand their finances and it causes them problems. Complex terminology describing concept-heavy arrangements about a non-tangible resource makes things difficult for everybody.
142 +
143 +
144 144  === {{id name="#mo1"/}}1. Use clear language. ===
145 145  
146 -Dealing with financial issues can be stressful, which means your audience will have less cognitive capability available. Write information so that it is easy for them to understand.
146 +Dealing with financial issues can be stressful, which means your audience will have less cognitive capability available. Make your information easy for them to understand.
147 147  \\
148 148  
149 -=== {{id name="#mo2"/}}2. Explain financial terminology. ===
149 +=== {{id name="#mo2"/}}2. Explain terminology. ===
150 150  
151 151  Avoid using financial jargon. Acronyms and pseudonyms may make sense internally, but people using your services may not understand them.
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