Changes for page Legal, medical and financial terms
Last modified by Lizzie Bruce on 2020/01/11 23:49
From version 1.58
edited by Lizzie Bruce
on 2019/04/24 11:02
on 2019/04/24 11:02
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Adding evidence from AM
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edited by Lizzie Bruce
on 2019/03/16 03:13
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... ... @@ -6,7 +6,6 @@ 6 6 * **people in a hurry** – simply written content is quicker to scan 7 7 * **people who are stressed** – if you're anxious it's difficult to understand complex text 8 8 * **people who are multi-tasking** – when distracted complex text is harder to comprehend 9 -* **people with low literacy** – will not know meanings of complex vocabulary and terms 10 10 * **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words involve less cognitive load 11 11 * **visual impairments** – short, simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller visual field 12 12 * **motor impairments** – it takes less physical effort to navigate shorter content ... ... @@ -113,14 +113,8 @@ 113 113 114 114 === {{id name="#UEL"/}}Usability evidence === 115 115 116 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" id="H" %) 117 -[['Department of Health Stakeholder Report: 2012'>>https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/department-of-health-stakeholder-report-2012]], research by Ipsos MORI, 2012 115 +==== Legal ==== 118 118 119 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 120 -[['Connecting with audiences. An evidence-based language sourcebook for the Department of Health'>>http://www.linguisticlandscapes.co.uk/pdf/DH%20Language%20Guidelines%20230710%20FINAL_for%20website_240114.pdf]], DoH and Linguistic Landscapes, 2010, revised 2014 121 - 122 -[['Writing content for everyone>>path:/xwiki/bin/get/Plain%20English/Plain%20English%2C%20simple%20sentences/?sheet=CKEditor.ResourceDispatcher&outputSyntax=plain&language=en&type=doc&reference=https%3A%2F%2Fgds.blog.gov.uk%2F2016%2F02%2F23%2Fwriting-content-for-everyone%2F]]', blog post by, Roz Strachan, Government Digital Service, 2016 123 - 124 124 [['Joseph Kimble—No, the law does not (normally) require legalese'>>url:http://www.ivacheung.com/2015/07/joseph-kimble-no-the-law-does-not-normally-require-legalese-editing-goes-global-2015/]] Editing Goes Global, 2015. Professor Joseph Kimble discusses the "psuedo-precision of legalese". 125 125 126 126 [[Plain language: the underlying research>>url:https://www.victorialawfoundation.org.au/sites/default/files/resources/Schriver_Karen%20Clarity2012.pdf]], Karen Schriver slide presentation, pages 29 to 35. ... ... @@ -131,6 +131,9 @@ 131 131 132 132 [[Plain English Campaign>>url:http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/campaigning/past-campaigns/legal/drafting-in-plain-english.html]] believes legalese is unnecessary and does not do what it was intended to. "The argument that clarity should be sacrificed for a document to be comprehensive does not stand up." 133 133 127 +==== 128 +Medical ==== 129 + 134 134 [[Guide to medical information>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/medicalguide.pdf]] from Plain English Campaign. 135 135 136 136 [[Guidance on writing letters to outpatients>>http://www.aomrc.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2018/09/Please_write_to_me_Guidance_010918.pdf]] from Academy of Medical Royal Colleges. ... ... @@ -139,11 +139,16 @@ 139 139 140 140 [['Connecting with audiences: An evidence-based language sourcebook for the Department of Health'>>http://www.linguisticlandscapes.co.uk/pdf/DH%20Language%20Guidelines%20230710%20FINAL_for%20website_240114.pdf]] Linguistic Landscapes, July 2010 141 141 142 -[[NHS content style guide beta>>https://beta.nhs.uk/service-manual/content/how-we-write]], January 2019 138 +[[NHS content style guide beta>>https://beta.nhs.uk/service-manual/content/how-we-write]], January 2019 139 + 143 143 144 - [[Ato Z of financial terms (PDF87KB)>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/financialguide.pdf]] fromPlain English Campaign.[[Plain English guide to financial term (PDF 686KB)>>https://www.nala.ie/resources/plain-english-guide-financial-terms]] from National Adult Literacy Agency, Ireland, January 2009.141 +==== Finance ==== 145 145 143 +[[A to Z of financial terms (PDF 87KB)>>http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/files/financialguide.pdf]] from Plain English Campaign. 146 146 145 +[[Plain English guide to financial term (PDF 686KB)>>https://www.nala.ie/resources/plain-english-guide-financial-terms]] from National Adult Literacy Agency, Ireland, January 2009. 146 + 147 + 147 147 (% class="box" %) 148 148 ((( 149 149 See also:
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