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... ... @@ -1,106 +1,101 @@ 1 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 2 -Clear language helps: 1 +(% class="box" %) 2 +((( 3 +Following this helps: 3 3 4 -* **people in a hurry** – simply written content is easier to scan and absorb instantly 5 -* **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words and sentences need less cognition 6 -* **visual impairments** – short and simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller field of focus 7 -* **motor impairments** – it's less tiring when you can understand what you read quickly 5 +* **people in a hurry** – simply written content is easier to scan and absorb instantly 6 +* **people who are stressed** – if you're anxious you find it harder to comprehend things 7 +* **people who are multi-tasking** – if you're holding a baby or a running business your attention's divided 8 +* **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words and sentences carry less cognitive load 9 +* **visual impairments** – short and simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller visual field 10 +* **motor impairments** – it's less tiring when you can understand what you read quickly 11 +))) 8 8 13 +== 14 +Guidelines == 9 9 10 - ==Guidelines==16 +* [[Simple sentences>>url:https://readabilityguidelines.myxwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Plain%20English/Plain%20English%2C%20simple%20sentences/#ssl]] 11 11 12 - [[Plain English>>Plain English||anchor="pe"]]18 +---- 13 13 14 -[[Sentence length>>Sentence length||anchor="ssl"]] 20 +== 21 +Simple sentences == 15 15 16 - Sentencestructure23 +=== 1. Make your average sentence 15 words long. === 17 17 18 - Specialistterms25 +The maximum sentence length for a good level of comprehension is 25 words. Split long sentences up into 2 or 3, or use bullet points. 19 19 20 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 21 -Words to avoid 27 +Oxford Guide to plain English, GOV.UK and linguists agree 15 word sentences are fine but above 40 words is hard to understand. 22 22 23 23 24 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 25 -Our guidelines come out of conversations held on Slack about clear language usability evidence. Clear language helps in all areas. It opens it up to the widest possible audience. 30 +=== 2. Avoid complex sentence structures. === 26 26 27 - 28 -== {{id name="pe"/}}Plain English == 29 - 30 -Make content clear and understandable, to open the web up for users with different literacy levels and access challenges. 31 - 32 -WCAG states that "using the clearest and simplest language appropriate is highly desirable." 33 - 34 -The United Nations recommends plain language for communications. 32 +They are less easy to comprehend quickly. Understanding them requires more cognitive effort than simple sentences. 35 35 36 36 37 - === 1.Chooseeasyandhortwordsnot formal, long ones. ===35 +Complexity depends on: 38 38 39 -Use ‘buy’ instead of ‘purchase’, ‘help’ instead of ‘assist’, and ‘about’ instead of ‘approximately’. 40 - 41 -Write for the reading comprehension of a 9 year old. This helps you reach the most users and makes your content easy to scan. 37 +* number of clauses in a sentence, the more clauses the more complex it is 38 +* distribution of associated words across the sentence – how easily can the brain 'parse a phrase': recognise, connect and comprehend words that together convey meaning 42 42 43 43 44 -=== 2. Jargon and buzzwords are unlikely to be clear language. === 41 +>Example:"The red fox jumped over the gate." – easier to understand 42 +>"The fox, which was red, over the gate jumped." – harder to understand 45 45 46 -Often, these words are too general and vague and can lead to misinterpretation or empty, meaningless text. Avoid them. Instead, think about what the term actually means and describe that. Be open and specific. 47 47 45 +== Usability evidence: simple sentences == 48 48 49 -Example: 50 -"Let's touch base in 10 and do some blue sky thinking." This uses jargon. 51 -"Let's meet in 10 minutes to think of some ideas." Conveys same meaning using clear language. 47 +Oxford Guide to plain English 52 52 49 +Jyoti Sanyal 'Indlish' 53 53 54 - === 3. Write conversationally.===51 +Author Ann Wylie 55 55 56 - Pictureyouraudienceand writeasf youweretalkingdirectly tothem,withthe authority of someonewho can help andinform.53 +[[Writing for GOV.UK>>url:https://www.gov.uk/guidance/content-design/writing-for-gov-uk]], UK Government website 57 57 55 +[['Sentence length: why 25 words is our limit'>>url:https://insidegovuk.blog.gov.uk/2014/08/04/sentence-length-why-25-words-is-our-limit/]], Inside GOV.UK, UK Government blog, 2014 58 58 59 - === 4. Testyourwithusers===57 +[['Content design'>>url:https://contentdesign.london/book/]], Sarah Richards, 2017 60 60 61 - Whatis 'plain'foronepersonmaynotbeformeone else.59 +[['The role of word difficulty and sentence length in text comprehension'>>url:https://apps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a114935.pdf]], T. M. Duffy and P. K. U'Ren, 1982 62 62 61 +[['The Influence of Semantics and Syntax on What Readers Remember'>>url:https://www.hcde.washington.edu/files/people/docs/Isakson_Spyridakis_Sem_Syn.pdf]], C. S. Isakson and J. H. Spyridakis, 1999 63 63 64 - ==Usabilityevidence fornEnglish==63 +[['How the brain attunes to sentence processing: Relating behavior, structure, and function'>>url:https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4819595/]], A. Fengler, L. Meyer, A. D. Friederici, National Center for Biotechnology Information 65 65 66 -[[ Guideline3.1Readable:Maketextcontent readableandunderstandable.>>url:https://www.w3.org/TR/UNDERSTANDING-WCAG20/meaning-supplements.html]],WebContentAccessibilityGuidelines(WCAG)2.0, 2008.65 +[['Functional Analysis of Clause Complex in the Language of News Websites Texts: A Comparative Study of Two Articles'>>url:http://www.ijsrp.org/research-paper-0616/ijsrp-p5445.pdf]], F. M. S. Eid, International Journal of Scientific and Research Publications, Volume 6, Issue 6, June 2016 67 67 68 -[[ 'Conventionon the Rightsof Persons with Disabilities'>>url:http://templatelab.com/convention-on-the-rights-of-persons-with-disabilities/]],page4 Article 2, Definitions, The United Nations Conventionon the RightsofPersonswith Disabilities, 2018.67 +[[Reading Level>>url:https://www.w3.org/TR/UNDERSTANDING-WCAG20/meaning-supplements.html]], Understanding SC 3.1.5, WCAG, 2008 69 69 70 -[[' PlainLanguageIsforEveryone, EvenExperts'>>url:https://www.nngroup.com/articles/plain-language-experts/]],H.Loranger,NielsenNormanGroup,201769 +[['Readability Assessment of Internet-Based Consumer Health Information'>>url:http://rc.rcjournal.com/content/53/10/1310/tab-pdf]], T. M. Walsh and T. A. Volsko in Respiratory Care October 2008, 53 (10) 1310-1315 71 71 72 -[['The PublicSpeaks:AnEmpirical StudyofLegalCommunication'>>url:https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=1843415]],C. R. Trudeau in14ScribesJ. Leg.Writing121 201271 +[['The research basis of plain language techniques: Implications for establishing standards'>>url:https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Karen_Schriver/publication/285927928_The_research_basis_of_plain_language_techniques_Implications_for_establishing_standards/links/5664c50208ae192bbf90aa85/The-research-basis-of-plain-language-techniques-Implications-for-establishing-standards.pdf]], Karen Schriver, PhD, Dr. A. L. Cheek, M. Mercer, Center for Plain Language, November 20, 2008, Mexico City 73 73 74 -[[' Strengtheningplainlanguage'>>url:http://www.iplfederation.org/]], InternationalPlainLanguageFederation.Undated.73 +[['Readability Levels of Health-Based Websites: From Content to Comprehension'>>url:https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ851863.pdf]], M. Schutten, A. McFarland, PhD, International Electronic Journal of Health Education, 2009, 12:99-107 75 75 76 -[[ PlainLanguageCommission styleguide>>url:https://www.clearest.co.uk/plain-language-commission-style-guide]],PlainLanguageCommission, 201175 +[['Writing smaller'>>url:http://clarity-international.net/journals/63.pdf]], Clarity Journal no. 63, 2010 77 77 78 -[[ 'The principlesof readability'>>url:http://www.impact-information.com/impactinfo/readability02.pdf]],Impact Information, William H. DuBay,200477 +[[Plain Language Commission style guide>>url:https://irp-cdn.multiscreensite.com/aaf9e928/files/uploaded/PLCstyleguide25July2012.pdf]], 2012 79 79 80 -[[ Plain language entry>>url:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plain_language]],Wikipedia,lastupdated201879 +[['Shorter Lines Facilitate Reading in Those Who Struggle'>>url:https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0071161]], Matthew H. Schneps , Jenny M. Thomson, Gerhard Sonnert, Marc Pomplun, Chen Chen, Amanda Heffner-Wong, 2013 81 81 81 +[['Towards a better measure of readability: Explanation of empirical performance results'>>url:https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1080/00437956.1989.11435805]], Leslie A. Olsen & Rod Johnson, Taylor & Francis Group, 2015 82 82 83 - =={{idname="ssl"/}}Shortce length==83 +[['What is plain language?'>>url:https://plainlanguagenetwork.org/plain-language/what-is-plain-language/]], Plain Language Association International, 2015 84 84 85 +[[Text complexity, ATOS, and Lexile® Measures>>url:https://www.renaissance.com/products/practice/accelerated-reader-360/atos-and-text-complexity/]], Renaissance Learning, 2016 85 85 87 +[['Understanding Plain English summaries. A comparison of two approaches to improve the quality of Plain English summaries in research reports.'>>url:https://researchinvolvement.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s40900-017-0064-0]] 2017 86 86 87 - ==Simplesentence structure==89 +[['How to use Yoast SEO: The readability analysis?'>>url:https://yoast.com/yoast-seo-readability-analysis/]] Edwin Toonen, Yoast, 2018 88 88 91 +[[The Crystal Mark standard>>url:http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/services/crystal-mark/7-the-crystal-mark-standard.html]] Plain English Campaign, undated 89 89 90 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 91 -Here's some sector specific guidance: 92 92 93 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 94 -Legal 94 +---- 95 95 96 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 97 -Medical 96 +See also: 98 98 99 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 100 -Financial 101 - 102 - 103 -{{children/}} 104 - 105 - 106 - 98 +* Plain English 99 +* [[Specialist terms>>url:https://readabilityguidelines.myxwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Plain%20English/Plain%20English%2C%20simple%20sentences/#st]] 100 +* [[Law, medicine, money>>url:https://readabilityguidelines.myxwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Plain%20English/Medical/]] 101 +* [[Words to avoid>>url:https://readabilityguidelines.myxwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Plain%20English/Words%20to%20avoid/]]