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... ... @@ -1,103 +1,115 @@ 1 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 2 -This helps: 1 +(% class="box" %) 2 +((( 3 +Following this helps: 3 3 4 -* **people in a hurry** – simply written content is easier to scan and absorb instantly 5 -* **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words and sentences need less cognition 6 -* **visual impairments** – short and simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller field of focus 7 -* **motor impairments** – it's less tiring when you can understand what you read quickly 5 +* **people in a hurry** – simply written content is easier to scan and absorb instantly 6 +* **people who are stressed** – if you're anxious you find it harder to comprehend things 7 +* **people who are multi-tasking** – if you're holding a baby or a running business your attention's divided 8 +* **cognitive impairments** – easy to understand words and sentences carry less cognitive load 9 +* **visual impairments** – short and simple sentences convey meaning in a smaller visual field 10 +* **motor impairments** – it's less tiring when you can understand what you read quickly 11 +))) 8 8 13 +== 14 +Guidelines == 9 9 10 10 11 -== Guidelines == 17 +(% class="wikigeneratedid" id="H1.MakeyouraveragesentenceA015wordslong." %) 18 +[[1. Make your average sentence 15 words long.>>1. Make your average sentence 15 words long.||anchor="#1"]] 12 12 13 -[[Plain English>>Plain English||anchor="pe"]] 20 +(% class="wikigeneratedid" id="H2.A0Avoidcomplexsentencestructures." %) 21 +[[2. Avoid complex sentence structures.>>2. Avoid complex sentence structures.||anchor="#2"]] 14 14 15 -[[Sentence length>>Sentence length||anchor="ssl"]] 23 +(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 24 +[[Usability evidence>>Usability evidence||anchor="#UESS"]] 25 + 16 16 17 - Sentence structure27 +---- 18 18 19 - Specialistterms29 +== == 20 20 21 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 22 -Words to avoid 31 +=== {{id name="#1"/}}1. Make your average sentence 15 words long. === 23 23 33 +The maximum sentence length for a good level of comprehension is 25 words. Split long sentences up into 2 or 3, or use bullet points. 24 24 25 - =={{idname="pe"/}}Plain English==35 +Oxford Guide to plain English, GOV.UK and linguists agree 15 word sentences are fine but above 40 words is hard to understand. 26 26 27 -Make content clear and understandable, to open the web up for users with different literacy levels and access challenges. 28 28 29 - WCAGstates that "usingthe clearest andsimplestlanguageappropriate is highly desirable."38 +=== {{id name="#2"/}}2. Avoid complex sentence structures. === 30 30 31 -The UnitedNationsrecommendsplainlanguagefor communications.40 +They are less easy to comprehend quickly. Understanding them requires more cognitive effort than simple sentences. 32 32 33 33 34 - === 1.Chooseeasyandhortwordsnot formal, long ones. ===43 +Complexity depends on: 35 35 36 -Use ‘buy’ instead of ‘purchase’, ‘help’ instead of ‘assist’, and ‘about’ instead of ‘approximately’. 37 - 38 -Write for the reading comprehension of a 9 year old. This helps you reach the most users and makes your content easy to scan. 45 +* number of clauses in a sentence, the more clauses the more complex it is 46 +* distribution of associated words across the sentence – how easily can the brain 'parse a phrase': recognise, connect and comprehend words that together convey meaning 39 39 40 40 41 -=== 2. Jargon and buzzwords are unlikely to be clear language. === 42 - 43 -Often, these words are too general and vague and can lead to misinterpretation or empty, meaningless text. Avoid them. Instead, think about what the term actually means and describe that. Be open and specific. 44 - 45 - 46 46 Example: 47 - "Let'stouch basein 10 anddosomeblueskythinking."This usesjargon.48 -" Let'smeetin10minutesto thinkofsomeideas."Conveys samemeaningusing clearlanguage.50 +\\(% class="mark" %)"The red fox jumped over the gate." – easier to understand 51 +"The fox, which was red, over the gate jumped." – harder to understand 49 49 50 50 51 - === 3. Write conversationally. ===54 +---- 52 52 53 - Pictureyour audience andwriteasfyouwere talkingdirectly to them,with theauthority ofsomeonewho canhelpand inform.56 +== {{id name="#UESS"/}}Usability evidence: simple sentences == 54 54 58 +Oxford Guide to plain English 55 55 56 - === 4. Testyourcontentwithusers ===60 +Jyoti Sanyal 'Indlish' 57 57 58 - Whatis 'plain' forone personmaynot be for someone else.62 +Author Ann Wylie 59 59 64 +[[Writing for GOV.UK>>url:https://www.gov.uk/guidance/content-design/writing-for-gov-uk]], UK Government website 60 60 61 - ==Usability evidenceforplainEnglish==66 +[['Sentence length: why 25 words is our limit'>>url:https://insidegovuk.blog.gov.uk/2014/08/04/sentence-length-why-25-words-is-our-limit/]], Inside GOV.UK, UK Government blog, 2014 62 62 63 -[[ Guideline 3.1 Readable: Make text contentreadableand understandable.>>url:https://www.w3.org/TR/UNDERSTANDING-WCAG20/meaning-supplements.html]],WebContent Accessibility Guidelines(WCAG) 2.0, 2008.68 +[['Content design'>>url:https://contentdesign.london/book/]], Sarah Richards, 2017 64 64 65 -[[' Conventiononthe RightsofPersonswithDisabilities'>>url:http://templatelab.com/convention-on-the-rights-of-persons-with-disabilities/]],page4Article 2,Definitions,The UnitedNationsConventionon theRights of Persons with Disabilities,2018.70 +[['The role of word difficulty and sentence length in text comprehension'>>url:https://apps.dtic.mil/dtic/tr/fulltext/u2/a114935.pdf]], T. M. Duffy and P. K. U'Ren, 1982 66 66 67 -[[' PlainLanguageIs forEveryone,EvenExperts'>>url:https://www.nngroup.com/articles/plain-language-experts/]],H.Loranger,NielsenNormanGroup,201772 +[['The Influence of Semantics and Syntax on What Readers Remember'>>url:https://www.hcde.washington.edu/files/people/docs/Isakson_Spyridakis_Sem_Syn.pdf]], C. S. Isakson and J. H. Spyridakis, 1999 68 68 69 -[[' ThePublicSpeaks:AnEmpiricalStudyofLegalCommunication'>>url:https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=1843415]],C.R.Trudeauin14ScribesJ.Leg.Writing121 201274 +[['How the brain attunes to sentence processing: Relating behavior, structure, and function'>>url:https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4819595/]], A. Fengler, L. Meyer, A. D. Friederici, National Center for Biotechnology Information 70 70 71 -[[' Strengtheningplainlanguage'>>url:http://www.iplfederation.org/]], InternationalPlainLanguageFederation.Undated.76 +[['Functional Analysis of Clause Complex in the Language of News Websites Texts: A Comparative Study of Two Articles'>>url:http://www.ijsrp.org/research-paper-0616/ijsrp-p5445.pdf]], F. M. S. Eid, International Journal of Scientific and Research Publications, Volume 6, Issue 6, June 2016 72 72 73 -[[ Plain LanguageCommission styleguide>>url:https://www.clearest.co.uk/plain-language-commission-style-guide]],PlainLanguageCommission, 201178 +[[Reading Level>>url:https://www.w3.org/TR/UNDERSTANDING-WCAG20/meaning-supplements.html]], Understanding SC 3.1.5, WCAG, 2008 74 74 75 -[[' Theprinciples of readability'>>url:http://www.impact-information.com/impactinfo/readability02.pdf]],ImpactInformation,WilliamH.DuBay,200480 +[['Readability Assessment of Internet-Based Consumer Health Information'>>url:http://rc.rcjournal.com/content/53/10/1310/tab-pdf]], T. M. Walsh and T. A. Volsko in Respiratory Care October 2008, 53 (10) 1310-1315 76 76 77 -[[ Plain language entry>>url:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plain_language]],Wikipedia, lastupdated201882 +[['The research basis of plain language techniques: Implications for establishing standards'>>url:https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Karen_Schriver/publication/285927928_The_research_basis_of_plain_language_techniques_Implications_for_establishing_standards/links/5664c50208ae192bbf90aa85/The-research-basis-of-plain-language-techniques-Implications-for-establishing-standards.pdf]], Karen Schriver, PhD, Dr. A. L. Cheek, M. Mercer, Center for Plain Language, November 20, 2008, Mexico City 78 78 84 +[['Readability Levels of Health-Based Websites: From Content to Comprehension'>>url:https://files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ851863.pdf]], M. Schutten, A. McFarland, PhD, International Electronic Journal of Health Education, 2009, 12:99-107 79 79 80 - == {{idname="ssl"/}}Shortsentencelength==86 +[['Writing smaller'>>url:http://clarity-international.net/journals/63.pdf]], Clarity Journal no. 63, 2010 81 81 88 +[[Plain Language Commission style guide>>url:https://irp-cdn.multiscreensite.com/aaf9e928/files/uploaded/PLCstyleguide25July2012.pdf]], 2012 82 82 90 +[['Shorter Lines Facilitate Reading in Those Who Struggle'>>url:https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0071161]], Matthew H. Schneps , Jenny M. Thomson, Gerhard Sonnert, Marc Pomplun, Chen Chen, Amanda Heffner-Wong, 2013 83 83 84 - ==Simple sentencestructure==92 +[['Towards a better measure of readability: Explanation of empirical performance results'>>url:https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/pdf/10.1080/00437956.1989.11435805]], Leslie A. Olsen & Rod Johnson, Taylor & Francis Group, 2015 85 85 94 +[['What is plain language?'>>url:https://plainlanguagenetwork.org/plain-language/what-is-plain-language/]], Plain Language Association International, 2015 86 86 87 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 88 -Here's some sector specific guidance: 96 +[[Text complexity, ATOS, and Lexile® Measures>>url:https://www.renaissance.com/products/practice/accelerated-reader-360/atos-and-text-complexity/]], Renaissance Learning, 2016 89 89 90 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 91 -Legal 98 +[['Understanding Plain English summaries. A comparison of two approaches to improve the quality of Plain English summaries in research reports.'>>url:https://researchinvolvement.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s40900-017-0064-0]] 2017 92 92 93 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 94 -Medical 100 +[['How to use Yoast SEO: The readability analysis?'>>url:https://yoast.com/yoast-seo-readability-analysis/]] Edwin Toonen, Yoast, 2018 95 95 96 -(% class="wikigeneratedid" %) 97 -Financial 102 +[[The Crystal Mark standard>>url:http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/services/crystal-mark/7-the-crystal-mark-standard.html]] Plain English Campaign, undated 98 98 99 99 100 - {{children/}}105 +---- 101 101 107 +(% class="box" %) 108 +((( 109 +See also: 102 102 103 - 111 +* [[Plain English>>doc:Plain English.Plain English, simple sentences.WebHome]] 112 +* [[Specialist terms>>doc:Plain English.Specialist terms.WebHome]] 113 +* [[Law, medicine, money>>doc:Plain English.Medical.WebHome]] 114 +* [[Words to avoid>>doc:Plain English.Words to avoid.WebHome]] 115 +)))